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Keshav Koirala  SINGLE SPACE THE LEFT SIDE FIRST PAGE HEADER

Professor Dr. Thompson

English 302

11 June 2015

A business approach of Cloud Computing CENTER TITLE

Nowadays NOWADAYS IS A BIT VAGUE AND INFORMAL.  CAN YOU BE MORE SPECIFIC?  Cloud computing is a hot topic in the technology field FOR COMPANIES, THE GENERAL PUBLIC, IT SCHOLARS?  BE A BIT MORE SPECIFIC. Every day, there are increasing number of the users AGAIN, COMPANIES, INDIVIDUALS, ETC?  LOOK FOR SOME FIGURES YOU CAN ADD IN TO SET OUR A MORE SPECIFIC PICTURE.  YOU CAN SET THAT UP IN INTRO BRIEFLY AND THEN DEVELOP IN A LATER SECTION, WHICH APPEARS TO BE YOUR PLAN IN THE OUTLINE BELOW  to use web-enabled devices  for accessing and sharing the information. NOW START A NEW PARAGRAPH TO EXPLAIN WHAT THE CLOUD IS The term cloud refers as data that store in the outside of user devices and whenever they want they can easily access their information from the internet. Cloud computing is the technology that provides computing over the internet. According to dictionarYOU WANT TO FIND AS MUCH INFO AS YOU CAN ON SPECIALIST/SCHOLARLY SOURCES AND CITE THEM GOING FORWARD  cloud computing is “Internet-based computing in which large groups of remote servers are networked so as to allow sharing of data-processing tasks, centralized data storage, and online access to computer services or resources”. BRIEFLY SET UP YOUR SECTION ON THE HISTORY OF THIS WITH TIMELINES? IF SO YOU COULD FILL THIS PARAGRAPH IN A BIT AND THEN START A NEW PARAGRAPH FOR CURRENT COMPANIES Today’s there are many companies that provide the cloud services in the market such as Google, Microsoft, and Amazon and so on. These companies provides,cloud services for both private and public sector. GOOD–YOU NEED TO SET THIS UP IN INTRO AND THEN DEVELOP AND SUPPORT BOTH IN LATER TWO SECTIONS WITH MORE INFO AND SOURCES FOR EACH  In public some of are they offer as free such as, Google email Drive, Dropbox, Google drive, Microsoft email, SkyDrive and many others. In business, sector, they offer more application as well data storage space. There are many companies are increasing  in the market  at the same time their department and the no of employees also increasing. Cloud computing help to provide theses companies and their employees to get the resources they need to run the business. For an example, companies need to by hardware and software to run their business.PROVIDE EXAMPLES OF THIS AND CITE SOURCES AS YOU FILL IN THIS PART EITHER HERE ON IN LATER SECTION  It is very expensive that companies provides each employee and department  for right software and applications. Also, they need to maintain the infrastructure such as hardware and software. For doing,  All of these things  companies need to spend a lot of time and money, but cloud computing avoid all of these problems  and make easier for doing the business. The help of the cloud computing companies only need to buy and install the software and the applications. YOU COULD GO INTO MORE TECHNICAL/BUSINESS DETAIL BELOW Once it installed every employee has assess all of the resources through the internet by just log in to their account. This paper will provide the overview of cloud computing and its impact in the business sector.

History of cloud computing

The concept of cloud computing was introduced back in 1960 by computer scientist John McCarthy. He suggested that “computation may someday be organized as a public utility. His concept was, computer technology can be sold as a business model like the utilities such as water and electricity. This idea was very popular in 1960, but it was not developing until 1990.  GREAT SECTION.  FILL IN AND SET UP BRIEFLY IN YOUR INTRO

  • Add more research…
  • Background of the Internet from the book of Isaacson

 

Model of Cloud computing

-type, business and private model  GOOD, FILL IN IN TWO SECTIONS WITH EXAMPLES AND STUDIES

Advantage and disadvantage of cloud

  • Talks more about add more references  A GREAT PLACE TO USE SOURCES

Security issue, Privacy issues

  • How secure are these technology,
  • Does user personal data are safe, and can protect their privacy  A GREAT PLACE TO USE SOURCES

Conclusion

-Rephrase the thesis, add more that support the thesis

 

References

Padhy, Rabi Prasad, and Manas Ranjan Patra. “Evolution of Cloud Computing and Enabling Technologies.” International Journal of Cloud Computing and Services Science 1.4 (2012): 182. ProQuest. Web. 24 July 2015.

This article was written by rabi Prasad Padhy, he was a senior Software Engineer at Oracle Corporation, Bangalore Karnataka, India. He explained about the history and model of the cloud computing.

Surya, K., et al. “Security Issues and Challenges in Cloud.” IEEE Conferences (2013): 889-93. ProQuest. Web. 17 July 2015

This article talks about security issue and challenge in field of cloud computing .Cloud computing is emerging as a rapid growing technology in the IT industry. As a large amount of information on individuals and companies are placed in cloud, there is an ultimate need to ensure the safety of the cloud environment. The main issues concerned with cloud are security, privacy, reliability, legal issues, open standard, compliance, freedom, long term viability etc. The various security issues associated with cloud computing include privileged access, regulatory compliance, data location, data segregation, recovery, investigative support, data availability. In this paper, security issues and challenges in various types and layers of cloud are discussed.

Joshua, Abah, and Francisca Ogwueleka. “Cloud Computing with Related Enabling Technologies.” International Journal of Cloud Computing and Services Science 2.1 (2013): 40. ProQuest. Web. 17 July 2015.

The author Joshua Abah is a Ph.D. fellow in Computer Science at the University of Technology, Minna, Nigeria. He is currently working in the academia where he has been for over five years now. His research interests include Networks, Cloud Computing, and virtualization, Scheduling Algorithms, QoS and Computer Education. Another author of this article is  Dr (Mrs) Francisca N. Ogwueleka is a Senior Lecturer and Head of Department of Computer Science, Federal University of Technology, Minna, Nigeria. She has worked for over thirteen years in the academia and her research interests include Applications of Data Mining and its Techniques, Cloud Computing, Virtualization in Cloud, Data Transfer Security and Network Security. cloud computing is not a complete new idea as it has intricate connections to technologies or domain such as the Grid Computing paradigm, and the general distributed computing. This article provides overview gives the basic concept of cloud computing, and highlights the relationship between Cloud computing and other cloud enabling technologies by providing their similarities and differences.

Singh, Ajey, and Maneesh Shrivastava. “Overview of Security Issues in Cloud Computing.” International Journal of Advanced Computer Research 2.1 (2012): 41. ProQuest. Web. 17 July 2015.

This article talks about model of cloud computing. Cloud computing is often provided “as a service” over the Internet, typically in the form of infrastructure as a service (IaaS), platform as a service (PaaS), or software as a service (SaaS).From an end users perspective, you don’t need to care for the OS, the plug-ins, web security or the software platform2]. Everything should be in place without any worry. This paper focuses on technical security issues in cloud computing, cloud computing has various benefits in an enterprise but major concern is how security is implemented in cloud computing.

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Yodit Reinhold DONT’ CHANGE SPACING FOR HEADER AND BODY OF PAPER

Dr. Thompson

Eng 302

July 25/2015

Final paper draft#1

Introduction

Autism spectrum disorder and autism are both general terms for a group of complex disorders of brain development. These disorders are characterized, in varying degrees, by difficulties in social interaction, verbal and nonverbal communication and repetitive behaviors. Autism appears to have its roots in very early brain development. However, the most obvious signs of autism and symptoms of autism tend to emerge between 2 and 3 years of age. Statistics from the U.S. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention recognize around 1 in 68 American children as on the autism spectrum. Studies also show that autism is four to five times more common among boys than girls. An estimated 1 out of 42 boys and 1 in 189 girls are diagnosed with autism in the United States. Autism spectrum disorder affects over 3 million individuals in the U.S. and tens of millions worldwide. For a long time there were many speculation on what causes autism. There is no one cause autism just as there is no one type of autism. GOOD INTRO ON FACTS. CITE SOURCES

In recent years scientists have identified a number of rare gene changes, or mutations, associated with autism. A small number of these are sufficient to cause autism by themselves. In most cases of autism appear to be caused by a combination of autism risk genes and environmental factors influencing early brain development. There is no one specific way of treating autism. Most of the time autism is treated by treating related problems through behavioral treatments, medicines or both. FOR EXAMPLE?  CITE SOURCES AND STUDIES HERE OR LATER Many people with autism have additional medical conditions such as sleep disorder, seizures and gastrointestinal distress. Addressing these conditions can improve attention, learning and related behaviors. Each child or adult with autism is unique and  each autism intervention plan addresses specific needs. However, noneYOU MEAN NON-VERBAL DON’T YOU? verbal autistic people can use technology THAT can provide and help WORDY, AS WE DISCUSSED CUT PROVIDE? them express their feelingS or communicate  better than THEY CAN WITH the medication and the therapy approach. In this paper will provide THIS PAPER WILL PROVIDE OR IN THIS PAPER I WILL PROVIDE  studies  and  evidence that  the uses of Ipad, computer software  and other portable electronic devices can be a communication tool for the nonverbal children with Autism and gives NONVERBAL CHILDREN A VOICE IS BETTER PHRASING BUT YOU CAN ALSO COME UP WITH ALTERNATIVES. THE PHRASING AT THE END OF THE INTRO NEEDS WORK? voice to speak for nonverbal children, because it can be used as alternative and augmentative communication device.

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Topic #1 It is visual NICE SET UP.  YOU CAN USE HEADERS, REFINING THE PHRASING A BIT

The use of ipad, computer software and other portable electronic devices makes visual images more accessible. Computer graphics capture and maintain the attention of people with autism. People with autism are visual thinkers. They think in pictures instead of word. Thoughts are like video tapes running in their imagination. Pictures are their first language, and words are their second language. As real visual thinkers, people with autism process information well when they can look at a picture or words to help them visualize information. As most autistic people are none verbal and have hard time to expresses their need or feeling, the use of these technologies approach will help people with autism to help them understand their environment as well as a communication means……. article to support the topic and examples GOOD, VERY IMPORTANT TO ADD SUPPORT FROM STUDIES AND EXPERTS

Topic #2 It is Audible

The use of audible technologies such as ipad or other electronic devices also can be useful tools to help them learn how to speak proper verbal language WHY VERBAL LANGUAGE by making connection WHO MAKES THE CONNECTION? to the visual picture they see on the ipad with the sound that is describing or explaining the picture. These technology devices can be the answer to helping the child communicate with  others. They can also be used to support academic learning in the classroom or at home. Speech will always be the goal for the none verbal people with autism, but not all will achieve it. A child cannot speak, doesn’t mean he cannot understand and with the help of audible technology they can overcome their speech struggle……….. article to support the topic and examples AGAIN SOURCES ARE IMPORTANT FOR EACH SECTION, AS YOU KNOW

Topic #3 It is easy to use

In recent year most technology developer made the simplicity of their products their competitive advantage. Making technology devices to be customized according to individual needs also a big part of today’s technology. Ipad apps are made easy and created to serve specific purposes. CAPthere are apps that are made to help and to be used in special education classrooms so that the children use them. The future of ipad made very simple and anybody can handle it……. article to support the topic and examples

Topic #4 it is portable

One of the amazing development of technology is that through time electronic devices became light weight, smaller in size and portable.  These made our life easier and the limitation of using technology due to size and portability became no more an issues for productivity.  The fact ipad and other electronic devices are portable children with autism can carry them and take them where ever they go since they use them to communicate ………. article to support the topic and examples

AS WE DISCUSED A LOT OF THIS GOES BACK TO ALAN KAY

Conclusion

The approaches of using medication can help physical problem that autism causes and therapy will help manage the emotion and a behavioral problem to some extent. YOU NEED TO ADD INFO FROM STUDIES ON THIS BUT YOUR LARGER POINT IS VERY GOOD.  However, the use of technology can help to achieve the communication and speech problem that autistic people deal with. …….. article to support the topic and examples