1.It was so fascinated reading your paper about the history of computer. I think you touch the many area on the history of computer. If you focused just one particular ideas or device that will help for your further research.
2. I think you started talking about history of computer but you only mention the after Engelbart time. It is much better if you cover more Charles Babbage and other scientist ideas.
3.There is no need extra point on this paper.
4.Yes , paper included specifies date , time and name of the scientist.
5.Yes paper has no citation issue.
6.Yes paper has two quotes.
7. Paper ended with good research question. It is very good and interesting topic to research on wire or wireless mouse. Both has advantage and disadvantage , so focused on both part in your research and impact on the business.
Hi Ki.L,
I really enjoyed reading your paper and i think you have covered all the important points. I like the way your concluded your paper by listing things that Engelbart invented but you paper focused on the invention of the mouse. You have also covered all the important dates & cite that is related to your paper. I think one way you can improve your paper is to think of other challenging research questions, since wired & wireless mouse have the same functions and their pros & cons are related as well. One of the questions that came to my mind is that how touch screen is effecting the usage of the mouse or is it possible to replace mouse with touch screen in the coming years or what are the pros & cons of touch screen and mouse?
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1.It was so fascinated reading your paper about the history of computer. I think you touch the many area on the history of computer. If you focused just one particular ideas or device that will help for your further research.
2. I think you started talking about history of computer but you only mention the after Engelbart time. It is much better if you cover more Charles Babbage and other scientist ideas.
3.There is no need extra point on this paper.
4.Yes , paper included specifies date , time and name of the scientist.
5.Yes paper has no citation issue.
6.Yes paper has two quotes.
7. Paper ended with good research question. It is very good and interesting topic to research on wire or wireless mouse. Both has advantage and disadvantage , so focused on both part in your research and impact on the business.
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Hi Ki.L,
I really enjoyed reading your paper and i think you have covered all the important points. I like the way your concluded your paper by listing things that Engelbart invented but you paper focused on the invention of the mouse. You have also covered all the important dates & cite that is related to your paper. I think one way you can improve your paper is to think of other challenging research questions, since wired & wireless mouse have the same functions and their pros & cons are related as well. One of the questions that came to my mind is that how touch screen is effecting the usage of the mouse or is it possible to replace mouse with touch screen in the coming years or what are the pros & cons of touch screen and mouse?
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